Snowflakes

First you see, that glimpse of white,

They say the first snowflake is like a flicker of light.

Snowflakes are so beautifully designed,

Anyone would think the creator had an extravagant mind.

It is said that no two snowflakes are the same,

I think that's true, if not, that would be quite lame.

On the ground you see, a fresh blanket of snow,

The neighborhood would be getting ready to mow.

To see these snowflakes would be quite a delight,

I've heard many a time, it's quite a sight.

I would truly love to see this,

But about this, the climate gives Pune a diss.

One day, I hope, I can see this phenomenon,

I hope, I see the snowflakes falling on my lawn!


This was my entry for Reese's Winter Writing Workshop!

~Renee

Comments

  1. GauriDecember 12, 2020 at 12:16 AM

    Your poems are so beautifully written! A very calm and sweet blog! I too want to be around snowflakes, but like you, there's no flakes around me!!

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    1. Renee KhanorkarDecember 13, 2020 at 7:42 AM

      Thank you so much, Gauri!! Yes, except in North India, there is no snow in India :( But I keep on dreaming! ;)

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    2. GauriDecember 13, 2020 at 9:14 PM

      Welcome Renee! And thanks for following :)

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  2. GauriDecember 23, 2020 at 4:49 AM

    Hi, I am Gauri. I have nominated you for Liebster Award! You could read the rules here: https://brighteralleys.blogspot.com/2020/12/nominated-for-liebster-award.html I would really appreciate if you participate <3

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    1. Renee KhanorkarFebruary 14, 2021 at 10:15 PM

      I'm so sorry for responding late! I'd love to participate in the award, and I will try!

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    Hi, I am Gauri. I have nominated you for Liebster Award! You could read the rules here: https://brighteralleys.blogspot.com/2020/12/nominated-for-liebster-award.html I would really appreciate if you participate <3

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    Hi, I am Gauri. I have nominated you for Liebster Award! You could read the rules here: https://brighteralleys.blogspot.com/2020/12/nominated-for-liebster-award.html I would really appreciate if you participate <3

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  6. AnonymousDecember 30, 2020 at 6:23 PM

    Hi. I’m Emma. I don’t know why my name is google account, but I want to make a blog in blogspot. Maybe you could help me since your blog is sooooo cool! Thanks!

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    1. Renee KhanorkarFebruary 14, 2021 at 10:17 PM

      Hi Emma! I would love to help you! I'm sorry for the late response! Thank you for the compliment! How should I help you? You can contact me at reneesuniquemind@gmail.com!

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  7. Maya RajeshFebruary 7, 2021 at 10:38 PM

    This is lovely, Renee! I absolutely adore your poetry, and I miss snow so much—I've seen it only a couple of times...

    "Snowflakes are so beautifully designed,
    Anyone would think the creator had an extravagant mind.
    It is said that no two snowflakes are the same,
    I think that's true, if not, that would be quite lame."

    This is such a lovely line, and also, your blog has a lovely font!

    I also have a blog, at prettylilscribbles.blogspot.com

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    1. Renee KhanorkarFebruary 14, 2021 at 10:18 PM

      Thank you so so much for all your compliments!! I really appreciate them! I would love to check out your blog!

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